8.RP.1.1

Kyle H~ 5/18/12 8:20 a.m. +Very easy to read and good information. -Could have a little less History and a little more Science. ~Reponse~ I believe this is true about my research paper, i think I used a little History because I wanted them to know a little bit about the wars.

Colton S~ 5/20/12 12:50 PM + Nice details and specifics. - Could have been a little bit more descriptive about the devastation. ~Reponse~ I think for this critque it is also true but I didn't think I needed that much information about the devastation.